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Tuesday, August 24, 2010

Just Like Heaven

There are plenty of boxes left to fill. Trying one by one, it stills feels somewhat empty though. Gladly I'm going to keep accepting all the printed pages of Sudoku you slip my way and now I've got a puzzlebook full of them.
Truth is, my lips belong, for just once, somewhere near yours. My soul asks to be in sync with yours.
And you see outside puzzles. You see the plastic and stone world around and you inhale its smoke. With a sigh and a smile you let it out. With a sigh and a smile you let me out.

Would they have silk threads of hair like you, falling in place itself, or my thick black waves?

10 comments:

Richa said...

Know what? I didn't get it fully, but about as much as I did, I know this is beautiful. It's lyrical, amazing. You're gifted with words. :)

Nur R. said...

OMG THANK YOU. BEST COMMENT SO FAR! Made my day. Really. :D

quartertoinsane said...

nicely written...

Fahim Akhter said...

I can actually relate to this, well could relate to this when I was back in uni. Ok wait, that might sound wrong. But anyways, dude you can write I never knew that, like really write :)

You folks in lahore are doing a pretty decent job with blogging. Just don't ever stop it. There would be phases when you forget to write let them be phases.

CrazyLady said...

OMG UNPROTECTED SEX!?

Nur R. said...

only after marriage, paagal.

Purple said...

*Sigh*
Makes me wish I could write like you.
Mystique.

Love it!!!

Nur R. said...

thank youuu.
It's not that great. :$
But thank you. :D

Anuradha said...

Beautifully written :D

Ubaid said...

Loved it :)